如何给剧本写大纲:幕、段落、节拍与场景
如何在动笔之前给剧本写大纲:逐层讲解幕、段落、故事节拍和场景。在写下一页之前,就在一个屏幕上看到整部影片。
在这一课中你将学到
- 什么是剧本大纲,以及它为什么能让你免于重写剧本页
- 五个结构层级:集或标题、幕、段落、故事节拍和场景
- Feature film 和 Episodical 项目如何处理幕这一层级
- 大纲行和眼睛图标是如何运作的
- Outline view 和剧本如何保持同步
- 大纲、故事梗概和故事大纲(treatment)之间的区别
大纲是你的故事地图,这一课讲解如何在写场景之前给剧本写大纲。在 ScreenWeaver 中,大纲不是一份独立的文档:它以结构元素的形式内嵌在剧本里,从标题或集,一直到幕、段落、故事节拍和场景。你会学到每个层级的含义,为什么 Feature film 项目隐藏了幕这一层级而 Episodical 项目保留了它,以及大纲行如何用平实的语言描述每一部分。
接着,Outline view 会把你的结构显示为一排排卡片,并与剧本保持同步。你还会看到大纲、故事梗概和故事大纲(treatment)之间的区别,以及一个分成八个段落的经典三幕冒险故事大纲,让你在写下一页之前就看到整部影片。
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英语旁白的文字稿。
0:04An outline is the map of your story. Before you write the scenes, you decide the road, where the story starts, where it turns and where it ends. Writers who skip the outline often write 60 pages and discover the story doesn't work. Writers who outline find out in an afternoon.
0:25In Screenweaver, the outline isn't a separate document. It's built into the script as structure elements. From the biggest to the smallest, the episode, or for a film, the title, the act, the sequence, the story beat, and the scene.
0:43An act is a big movement of the story. Most films have three. The setup, the confrontation, the resolution. A sequence is a chapter inside an act, a series of scenes with one goal, like the crossing or the fog. A story beat is one moment where something changes. And a scene is a single place and time, the unit you actually write.
1:09In a feature film project, Screenweaver hides the act level, so your structure goes straight from the title to sequences, beats, and scenes. In an episodical project, every level is there, because a series needs episodes and acts.
1:25Each structure element has an outline line under it, a short description written in plain words, what happens here and why it matters. These lines are your notes to yourself. The eye icon in the toolbar shows or hides them, so you can read the clean script when you want.
1:43Now switch on the outline view in the sidebar. Above the page, your structure appears as rows of cards, one row per level. The title, then the sequences, then the beats, then the scenes. Each card shows its title and its outline line. It's your story on one screen.
2:04And the outline and the script are the same thing, seen two ways. Add a beat in the outline, and it appears in the script. Write a scene heading in the script, and a scene card appears in the outline. Drag a card, and the script follows.
2:19What's the difference between an outline and a synopsis or a treatment? A synopsis tells the story in prose, in a page or two, for someone who will read it. An outline is a working tool, for you. Short, structured, easy to move around. You can write a synopsis later, from the outline, in a few minutes, but the other way round is much harder.
2:44Here's what the outline of a classic adventure film might look like. Three acts. In Act 1, two sequences. The Ordinary Life and The Call. In Act 2, four sequences. The Journey, the First Trial, the Betrayal, the Darkest Night. In Act 3, two. The Final Battle and the Return. Eight sequences. And under each one, three or four beats. Thirty beats, and you can see the whole film before writing a single page.
3:17That's why we'll build the outline first. Changing a card costs one second. Rewriting 20 pages costs a week. In the next lecture, we learn the most powerful tool of the outline. Story beats. And the labels that tell you where you are in the story. And the other one, three. Story beats.