AI で脚本のシーンを書き、書き直す方法
AI で脚本のシーンを書き、書き直す方法。1つの正確な依頼で正しいフォーマットのシーンの下書きができ、物語、カメラ、セリフの3回の推敲で自分のものになります。
このレッスンで学ぶこと
- 正確なシーンの依頼の書き方：場所、出来事、長さ、セリフの上限
- アシスタントが柱、ト書き、役名、セリフを脚本に直接書き込む仕組み
- すべての脚本家に必要な3回の推敲：物語、カメラ、セリフ
- 感情を撮影できる画に変える方法
- キャラクターの名前を全体で変更し、シーンのトーンを書き直す方法
- Undo とバージョン履歴のチェックポイントで、AI の変更をすべて元に戻せるようにする仕組み
このレッスンでは、AI で脚本のシーンを書き、それからすべての脚本家がすることをします。つまり書き直しです。ScreenWeaver のアシスタントに、The Night Ferry の1シーンを頼みます。夜のフェリーの甲板、長さは半ページ、セリフは短いものを最大2行。柱、ト書き、役名、セリフが正しいフォーマットで脚本に書き込まれていく様子を見ていきます。
そこから3回の推敲です。物語の推敲では、Maya がそのトリックをどう覚えたかを説明するセリフを削ります。カメラの推敲では、感情を3語と1つの画に置き換えます。セリフの推敲では、「Wake up, old girl.」（起きろ、婆さん）という1行にたどり着きます。さらに、1回の依頼ですべてのシーンのキャラクターの名前を変え、出来事は変えずにシーンをより緊迫したものに書き直し、Undo とバージョン履歴を使って、AI の変更が決して最終決定にならないようにします。無料の脚本講座、レッスン4.3です。
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0:04You have a structure and a voice. Now let's have the assistant draft scenes directly in the script and then do what every screenwriter does, rewrite.
0:15Be precise about where and how. Here's the request. Under the beat, the engine dies. Write the scene. Exterior, the ferry deck, night. The fog swallows the shore. The engine dies. Elias fails to restart it. Maya fixes it by hitting it twice in the same spot. Half a page. Two short lines of dialogue at most. Use the names Elias and Maya.
0:43Watch the script fill in. A scene heading, action lines, character cues and dialogue, all in the right format, in the right place. Now the real work starts. Three passes.
0:58First pass, the story. Does the scene change something? Here, yes. Elias stares at her. She knows his trick. But the assistant added a line where Maya explains how she learned it. Cut it. The mystery is the point.
1:17Second pass, the camera. Read every action line and ask, can we film this? The assistant wrote, Elias feels a strange familiarity. That's a feeling. We replaced it with, Elias stares at her. Three words. One image.
1:35Third pass, the dialogue. Select a line in your head, quote it to the assistant, and ask for something shorter, colder, or funnier. Wake up, old girl. Four words. And we hear her father in them. Which is exactly the point.
1:52Two more requests that save hours. Rename a character everywhere. For example, rename Elias to Elliot in every scene. And every cue changes in one go. Then check the story elements so the old name doesn't linger there. And change the tone of a whole scene. Rewrite the cabin scene so it's more tense. Keep the same events. Then compare. Even if you don't keep the rewrite, it shows you options you hadn't seen.
2:22And if a change goes wrong, undo works as usual. And every change the assistant makes is saved as a checkpoint in the version history, in the sidebar. You can open it, look at an earlier version, and restore it. Nothing the AI does is ever final.
2:40Your exercise. Have the assistant draft one scene of your story. Do the three passes, story, camera, dialogue, and restore an earlier version at least once, just to know how. Next, importing a script you've already written.